Creating a scene - essential elements to writing your story, scene by scene

So, I've fallen a bit out of love with my latest manuscript and looking for tips to freshen up my approach. Thanks goodness writers are a generous and caring lot! Perhaps it's because we know the pain and frustration of this totally insane lifestyle choice... I digress, as I usually do when stuck. Sometimes you write a scene and it appears to function well, but you get the feeling something is missing and you can't quite put your finger on it. Writer John August has a great website, with tips for writing scenes, to ensure you have all the elements needed. how-to-write-a-scene.pdf

Here's a brief overview:

1. What needs to happen in this scene?
2. What would happen if this scene got omitted?
3. Who needs to be in the scene?
4. Where could the scene take place?
5. What's the most surprising thing that could happen in the the scene?
6. Is this a long scene or a short scene?
7. Brainstorm three different ways it could begin
8. Play it on the screen in your head
9. Write a scriibble version
10. Write the full scene
11. Repeat

The only thing I would add to this, is - Write three different ways this scene could END. I think having options helps free the mind. Doesn't matter if two of the options are ridiculous, it helps free the mind to possibilities. I'm also thinking of using colours for scene elements. I'll let you know how I go with that!
Cheers,
Dawn

What's your story about? - Selling your story to a publisher

A few years ago I attended a workshop by novellist Nicole Murphy who introduced us to Michael Hauge, a mentor to film script and novel writers. I started using his six stage plot structure immediately, which turned my novel from confusing to a contract!

Michael Hauge is a generous man. His website http://www.storymastery.com/ has loads of free advice for authors. I have recommended and passed on his advice in my own writing workshops. I've just watched this video selling your story in sixty seconds and bought the book. I'm rubbing my hands with glee, waiting for it to arrive!

So, if you're in a bit of a hole today with your writing, click over to youtube and watch some of Michael's videos. You'll soon be tapping away like a frenzied woodpecker.

Once Upon A Christmas

It's here! This lavish, beautiful book of European folk tales, memoirs and recipes about that lovely time of year - Christmas. It's a keepsake, an heirloom to pass onto your children. In it, I have a memoir piece about my experiences of Christmas as a child in three lands; England, Australia and Norway. To purchase - www.booktopia.com.au

10 Reasons Why You Should Read to Your Child

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I love reading to my daughter. I've seen it open her mind to the amazing world we live in, to the past and all its secret joys and mysteries. I've heard the language reflected in her speech (and attitude!) Reading to your child, every night before bed, is such a simple yet powerful way to build a strong relationship between you and positively influence every aspect of your child's life. Here's ten reasons why you should turn off the telly, computer, video game and just read together -

1. Quiet time
Getting to sleep can be difficult for some children. They need time to wind down from the stresses and excitement of the day. A bedside lamp, curtains drawn creates a snug environment that slows the heart rate and helps prepare the body for sleep. My daughter has an imaginary horse called Snowflake and if she's feeling a bit wound up I encourage her to dream up a new blanket or some other decorated item for her dream horse. These days, Snowflake is pretty spoiled! He's got everything a horse could possibly need.

2. Intimacy
Children have worries. They need to feel safe to confide their concerns to you. By excluding every distraction, (TV, computers, video games, the news etc) you offer something very precious to your child - your undivided attention. This sends a clear message, straight to their heart: "You are important to me. I am here for you." In these quiet moments before bed, a closeness develops and is maintained that gives your child a sense of security and love. You can say  'I love you' until you're blue in the face, but it's when you put aside your time that it really means something.

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3. Expressive Language - Vocabulary
When you read aloud your voice is modulated, that is, it rises and falls. You naturally emphasize parts slightly louder or softer to enhance the understanding of the story. You act it out. When my husband first started reading to our little girl he sounded a bit like a robot, poor guy! Now he is very entertaining. She watches him, enraptured. Hearing us read to her has expanded her spoken vocabulary, because she will stop us and ask if a word is unfamiliar. This helps her utilise these same words in her own speech, giving her more tools to express herself. A larger vocabulary gives the child power over their speech and their thoughts.

4. Spelling
Being exposed to the written and spoken word improves vocabulary but also spelling and reading skills at school. Hearing a word pronounced correctly goes into the child's 'data bank', so that when they come across that word in their own reading, they can recognise it, or figure it out. The more words they are used to seeing, the easier spelling tests become. Visualising, or creating a picture in the mind, is a natural part of reading. This is also a valuable skill for learning to spell, as we must remember what words look like, if they aren't easy to figure out by their sounds.

5. Academic success
A reader is smarter, more articulate and confident. Why? Because they are more familiar with their own language. They have a greater understanding of a wide range of topics because they have read about them. They are able to use clues such as context when they come upon an unfamiliar word. They can tackle literacy tasks at school more easily because they have better language skills.

6. Memory
Readers use their imagination when they read to visualise the story and characters. This enhances their ability to memorise, holding thoughts and pictures in their head, adding to them as they read more. TV does not help this develop because it provides everything - the picture, the sound, the action. A viewer isn't using language themselves. This makes for a lazy brain. The ability to hold thoughts and concepts in short term memory is extremely important for learning, especially for concentration. Reading a plain page with black print forces the brain to create the action inside it, using more of the brain's fabulous abilities and increasing its power.

7. Accuracy and understanding
During reading time at night you can take turns reading out loud. This provides the opportunity to correct their accuracy, adding to their personal word bank. This then increases comprehension, (and enjoyment!). In 25 years of teaching literacy, this is the one tip I give parents that makes the most difference. Encourage your child to READ. The first step is reading to them.

8. Morals and values
By choosing good quality reading material you can teach your child the important morals we all must learn in society. There are thousand of excellent books for children, but some of the best are the classics, which teach kindness, bravery, compassion, cleverness, wit and strength. Reading these stories provides you with an opportunity to discuss why it's wrong to steal or abuse animals, the importance of The Golden Rule etc. Books are a powerful, non-intrusive, fun way to show your child how to become a happy, healthy human being.

9. General Knowledge
Reading about subjects you knew little about can also increase your own general knowledge as well as your child's. In our house we've covered topics I hadn't thought of, such as fossicking and caves, space and the universe, the human body systems, how food is grown and many more. This increases a child's confidence to understand the world around them and be able to make good decisions for themselves.

10. Culture and history
Reading opens up a whole new world, of foreign cultures, as well as your own. An appreciation of the diversity of human culture is important to a child's sense of self and where they fit in their community and the world. Being sensitive to the culture and values of others is also important. There could be many interesting aspects to your own family history that would otherwise go unnoticed if the topic didn't come up in reading. Children need to have a clear sense of their own identity. Reading family stories is another wonderful way to keep treasured memories alive.

I wish every parent was able/willing to read to their children. It would do a lot towards eliminating illiteracy and by association, poverty. Knowledge is power. And the first step to knowledge is being literate. Read to your child. Open up the world to them! Make them feel special and loved. And it's never too early to start.

For more information on helping your child to read, click here:  Montessori