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WRITING TIPS for the holidays

source So, you've been aching to get stuck into that new story for months but work commitments/life hasn't allowed for the full immersion needed to really nut out the plot and characters. Perhaps you've got your first draft almost done. Either way, I have some tips for you - easy ways you can improve your writing, whatever stage you are at. TIPS 1.      Use strong verbs rather than ineffectual words such as 'started', 'was', 'had', 'just'. Go through your entire MS and eradicate them! 2.      Try not to begin sentences with the noun/subject of the sentence, such as 'the' or the person's name. Begin with verbs, adverbs (sparingly) or subordinate clauses. This adds variety and can have a strong influence upon the rhythm of your work. 3.      Try to keep one subject per sentence ie: if you're describing a person, keep to them, or if it’s the ocean, develop that further. Link ideas with the first word of the next se...

The Man from Cox's River DVD - A Brilliant Story of Modern Conservation

I'm so pleased to tell you that this DVD is now available, just in time for Christmas. I was lucky enough to see it, at The Mount Vic Flicks cinema, when it was first released. It's the story of the removal of the last wild brumbies from the Megalong Valley in the Blue Mountains National Park. You'll cry, you'll chuckle and you'll feel your heart in your mouth as local cowboy, Luke Carlon, endeavours to remove these horses by leading them out of the forest one at a time. Support Australian small films and buy your copy!   Man From Cox's River DVD